【素材摘录】
Despite the inconvenience of drizzles(毛毛雨), the annual Concert on the Green at Shanghai's popular Chenshan Botanical Garden in Songjiang district presenting a scenic feast of nature combined with classical music, kicked off on Saturday as scheduled.
The annual two-day event, which first began in 2011 when the garden opened to the public, has been one of the biggest and most popular open-air concerts of classical music, usually to a sold-out audience.
This year, however, the concert presented by Shanghai Opera House Symphony Orchestra is dedicated to an invited audience consisting mostly of medical workers, policemen, volunteers, social workers and cleaners who have made special contribution to the fight against the COVID-19 pandemic.
Shanghai holds classical music concert for COVID-19 fighters
【话题分析】
所选素材材料话题为“向参与疫情防治的工作者致敬”。
以往作文话题涉及到“工匠精神”、“改革开放做出功勋的百名人物致敬”赞美抗疫英雄的句子英文,类似于这类话题,比较新,能够极大地传递正能量。所以,上海音乐节以“致敬新冠病毒防治的勇士们”显得特别接地气,符合弘扬社会风气、树立正确的英雄、偶像价值观;同时,材料特别真实,而且同学们有话可以讲。当然,这也符合新课程标准的三大核心范畴“人与社会”。
【作文命题】命题思路,可以模仿现在江苏高考英语的几个部分,可以设置考题如下:
1. 请以30词概括上文信息;
2. 谈谈你对于“以音乐会来致敬新冠防治工作者”这一做法的认识,不少于2点理由来支撑。
【写作指导】素材积累
1. 常用单词及短语
inconvenient不方便 the annual concert年度音乐会 a scenic feast 盛宴
Be combined with合并而成 kick off as scheduled如期举办
Shanghai Opera House Symphony Orchestra上海剧院交响乐队
be dedicated to 致力于 consist of 由组成 make special contributions to对做贡献
2.经典句型
Despite the inconvenience of drizzles(毛毛雨), the annual Concert kicked off on Saturday as scheduled.尽管下着毛毛雨,年度音乐会周六如约而至。
However, the concert presented by Shanghai Opera House Symphony Orchestra is dedicated to an invited audience consisting mostly of medical workers, policemen, volunteers, social workers and cleaners who have made special contribution to the fight against the COVID-19 pandemic.然而,上海剧院交响乐队举办的音乐会,主要参与者是来自于医疗人员、警察、志愿者、社区工作者、清洁工等受邀人群,他们在新冠疫情期间为抗疫做出过特别贡献。
3. 正文首段概括参考如下:
In a gesture to salute the special staff fighting against the epidemic, Shanghai Opera House Symphony Orchestra launched the annual concert, featuring the combination of classic music and nature.(29)
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